It was a stormy
day. The lightning was horrendous. There was a fight on God of Wars Bay between
Grimbeard the Ghastly and Baggybum the Birdbrain. Baggybum lashed out with his
heavy, threatening sword at Grimbeard’s grey face…… His eye was the only thing
he lost that day.
Austin
As I stumbled into the woods, I saw a mysterious cave. I
started to quiver when the mossy cave opened up. I stared inside and in the
corner was a cobweb shining in a beam of light. I was petrified but wanted to
see more. I felt a cat brush against my legs and a broomstick swept around a
pitch-black cauldron. I saw someone in a long cloak with a wart on their face,
holding up a potion.
Annabel
She zoomed across the moonlit sky on her tatty old
broomstick. In her right hand she carried a magic, evil wand and on her head
she wore a black, pointy hat. Green goo dripped off her crooked warty nose in
the cold night air. She landed her broomstick in the dark, damp cave. She
pulled out of her smelly, torn bag six frogs’ eyes and eight troll ears, to
make a potion in the copper cauldron.
Emily T
Pieface plonked his velvet red nose in the middle of his
pale white face. He gazed at himself in the mirror. Something was not quite
right. He had forgotten to put on his pants. He hopped into his baggy,
rainbow-striped trousers. They were far too big. Pieface adjusted his braces to
fit him properly. “Perfect,” he thought. He reached for his favourite orange-and-purple,
spotty hat – the one with the flower on it. He clonked his enormous shoes over
the side of his unicycle and he was off. Pieface rode through the
apple-coloured curtains on his one-wheeled contraption.
Charlotte
Frank, the little boy, gave a note to Charlie, the old tired
man who chopped wood for a living. The note contained a very important message
that would make Charlie rich.
Liam
Dodger had found some wallets full of money. “Give it,” said
Fagin in a low voice. He put out his old and wrinkly hand. Dodger gave them
before Fagin got angry.
Bridie
The old man’s clothes were scruffy and torn. He was sitting
on a brown chair, tired and weak. Standing next to the old man was a young boy
with torn trousers and a magician’s black hat with a white bow tie. He also was
wearing a jacket and a vest. He was giving the old man money that he had stolen
from a person’s pocket.
Mikayla
Old Fagin has a long grey beard that matches his hair, which
is bald through the middle. He has a long black overcoat that covers almost his
whole body. Fagin also wears torn, holey gloves. Wishing that Oliver Twist had
got something more valuable, he still took it.
Young Oliver Twist has a shiny black top-hat with slightly
lighter hair…. Wearing his waistcoat, he also has a bow tie. Thinking that my
master would be impressed when I showed him the stolen goods that were in my possession…
Maddie
Joshua stepped into his grandad’s house. He was glad to
escape the rain. Inside, sat his grandad in his old rusty rocking-chair. This
old man’s name was George. He had a white scruffy beard like a wizard’s. He
also wore dark clothes that he had worn into holes. His grandson was excited to
see him because it was his grandad’s birthday. Joshua wore an odd combination
of clothes. He held out the present, which was a book that he had saved up his
pocket money for. His grandad felt pleased when he looked inside his handmade
card.
Annabel
Dodger looked suspiciously at Fagin, with the old man’s
wallet clasped in his still hands. Dodger wondered what was inside the wallet.
He raised his eyebrows, staring into the pickpocket-leader’s eyes and had a
strange feeling that he knew what this could come in handy for. Fagin’s hand
quivered. Dodger flipped the wallet open and a look of shock appeared on his
face.
Charlotte
The woman ran to her workshop. She slammed the door shut. “At
last,” she thought, “the key is mine, mine – all mine!” She carefully opened
the box where she had stored the key. This key was a lovely masterpiece. She
grabbed a little keyhole. The key wandered through it. The woman (Lilly)
yelled, “I can finally be a prettier woman.” Her eyes began to prickle.
She felt the stinging in her eyes; soon they would become
big, blue sparkling eyes – the most beautiful in the land.
Emily Mc